I can’t bear your yells, and nobody could stand.
I’m blocking your mouth with my naked hand.
How painful! I’m trying to keep my calm.
Not huge thorns… your barbed words are piercing my palm.
by TETIANA ALEKSINA
© All rights reserved 2014
I can’t bear your yells, and nobody could stand.
I’m blocking your mouth with my naked hand.
How painful! I’m trying to keep my calm.
Not huge thorns… your barbed words are piercing my palm.
by TETIANA ALEKSINA
© All rights reserved 2014
yes words hurt more than actions many a times. Loved your flash poem .
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Oh, how I love my thoughtful readers ❤
Thanks, Ambika!
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This is wonderful! I love impromptu, a “flash-poem”. Really, thorns are not so bad, just need to know how to handle them, always go with the grain! See, you are always ready for a challenge! Bravo!
Alice ♥
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Thank you for inspiration, my dear Alice…
This was born because of you 🙂
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Hum…Born of Thorns! Long live Thorns! Thank you for the lovely gift of words! Please have a wonderful evening and stay warm!
Alice ♥
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Born of Thorns. Long live Thorns.
Wow… Thank you, Alice! ❤
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Excellent…. Truly well penned…
Best wishes to you!, Aquileana 😀
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Oh, thank you Aquileana! Thank you for lovely words!
I’m so glad to see you on my blog!
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Ouch! Sounds like there’s an epic struggle going on there! 😛
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Yeah! 😀
I guess, it’s our naive Noble Knight just put off his rose-tinted glasses 😉
https://unbolt.wordpress.com/2014/11/27/ladys-soul/
OK, next time he will be more smart… he will take his armor… his glovers which are made from dragon’s leather 😉
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I can’t wait to see how this unfolds! 😛
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What about a short comic? 😉
My plot – your art! World-wide glory – for you… (I’m too shy and modest… I prefer my cozy shadow forest instead of red carpets and spotlights…)
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A collaboration, eh? I do like the sound of that… 😀
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Oh, yeah! An unexpected idea… but… why not? 😛
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Let’s discuss it! I’ll send you an email in the next day or two. This could be very cool!
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Seriously? Wow!
Great! 😀
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I love collaborating with people, and your writing is of such high quality that I would consider it an honour to work with you!
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No, Tony, it’s an honor for me… for girl who just writes and just has a fun from what she does 🙂
I promise do all my best and be as flexible as a comic genre requires!
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Then I shall do all my best too! What a team! 😀
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Dream-team! 😀
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Awesome work my ❤
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Thank you, Walt ❤
I'll handle with your gull 🙂 But not today…
Good night! 🙂
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Good night my ❤ sweet dreams 🙂
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