I took lessons of humility
from the worn roadside stones.
Nothing can teach civility
so well as the shattered bones.
That’s why my posture is queenly
and my manners are aesthetic.
Your sense of beauty knows so keenly
when reality is prosthetic.
by TETIANA ALEKSINA
© All rights reserved 2015
This is a masterpiece!
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Thank you!
Your praise makes me fly ❤
Aww… please, grab my feet! I almost fly away!
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Fly unbolt, fly!
Don’t be afraid,
you won’t fall.
Fly unbolt, fly!
Reach for the sun,
and kiss the sky.
🙂
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You’re really amazing, just a boy from Germany who enjoys occasional writing! You’re great!
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“I took lessons of humility
from the worn roadside stones.”
Wow. If I could write like you, Un, then I could call myself a true poet! You had me from these first two lines!
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It’s nice that you can’t write like me, and I can’t write like you 🙂
It would be boring to death… but we do love to get a bit of fun, yes? 😉
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Oh my, yes we do! 😉
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Learning from those who have been there before you. Laid the road for you. Thw word “civility” is clever, civil engineers lay the roads. Maybe that is what we are doing now?
Learning from the mistakes of others. The way in which you word it is beautiful.
Thanks
HG
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Thank you, HG!
Wow… every new follower for me is an exciting event. But followers like you – thoughtful, poetical, who can tease and please my imagination – it’s a piece of luck!
I love the way you think and write.
Thank you, Henry!
Yours,
Lady Unbolt 😛
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Feelings mutual, my Lady.
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Wonderful! Reminded me of one of my favorite songs by Typhoon, titled “100 Years”!
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Thank you, Ry! Wow, a big song!
I decided to learn a bit more about this musical band and found this song.
Do you know this song?
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Ah, yes, that’s one I was also actually thinking of! I like “100 Years” more though! Typhoon is one of my favorite bands. Their song “The Lake” is my favorite song of all songs, tied with Flagship’s “What It’s All About”.
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(Sorry for the late reply, Ry)
This song is amazing, Ry. Thank you!
I found the lyric, and it’s really great!
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Plastic is forever pretty! Wonderful commentary on life and its twists and turns! Love your thought process!
Always,
Alice ♥
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Ha-ha, plastic all the way, I love t!
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Oh wow!! I think your making me smart
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Oh, thank you…
Do I make you smart? LOL!
Really? 🙂
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You make me think more than anyone 🙂
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I hope, you don’t mind 🙂
Thinking is a pretty useful thing 😉
How are you, Walt? Sorry, last days I was a bit distracted… Why are free days so busy?
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You make me feel so alive!! 🙂 I understand my ❤ and I know, whatever your doing or wherever you are… Im there with you 🙂
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Alive… Well… Well!
Where is your new posts, my dear Frankenstein? 😛
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Oh ive not had anything good to post but i may find something soon 🙂
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I wanted to comment, then I realized it was more need than anything. Unfortunately this poetry leaves me with broken thoughts. When I find glue you will know. Maybe I just need to read it again. And again.
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Of course, I’ll wait…
Oh, you lost some thoughts here! Here… and here. Please, take it!
Thought cannot be without owner… it’s like a smile without a cat 😉
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