To be weak
is harder doubly.
They must bear
weight of ruth.
No one commiserates strong.
It lightens their load.
by TETIANA ALEKSINA
© All rights reserved 2015
To be weak
is harder doubly.
They must bear
weight of ruth.
No one commiserates strong.
It lightens their load.
by TETIANA ALEKSINA
© All rights reserved 2015
unbolt me 
Unbearable … truth! 🙂
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Awwww… Thank you ❤
It's so nice to see you on my modest blog!
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anytime 🙂
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A question though, how does someone know when you have posted something new on your page?
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LOL! Have you ever tried to push the button ‘Follow’? 😛
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Yeah, I do follow you don’t I, checking …
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I will call you ‘unbolt’ – there is a book & a movie you might watch: ‘The Unbearable Lightness of Being’ -enjoy
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Oh… thank you!
‘The Unbearable Lightness of Being’… It looks very interesting. I guess I’ve heard something but I haven’t read (watched).
LOL! Of course, feel free to call me ‘unbolt’. Generally, feel free to call me any way that will be pleasant for you 😛
My friends call me Tia or Tati/Teti mostly. But I really enjoy when someone puts some creativity efforts here 😉
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Hanging on a group of unchained dichotomies… i.e Being alive … Sigh 🙄
Sending you all my best wishes!. Aquileana 😀
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Thank you, my dear Aquileana, for this beautiful comment!
You’re absolutely right! Oh, being alive… how it’s hard sometimes ❤
My warmest wishes,
your Tatiana
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You make me want to learn more about forms, but I doubt I’ll ever conform
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Do you know… it’s like an asana.
It can look absolutely uncomfortable outside, and nobody (except of you) feels how it can be cozy inside.
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Love your work always!
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❤ ❤ ❤
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HTFDYDT?
I see you have the tweezers out again! Amazing! Just amazing, the commentary is terrific! I love every word, yes every word!
Yours,
Alice ♥
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Oh… Alice… I feel a bit awkward… just like he… because of your compliments ❤
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Wonderful video! ❤
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Yes, he’s cute as hell! 😛
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how do you even hAHAh
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❤ ❤ ❤
How is your homework, Stasia?
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hAHAh doing quite well. I did badly for that poem test tho. quite a pity but my teacher prefers to write in an another way yet I foolishly did the opposite without knowing but oh wrll
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Damn… it’s pity 😦
But your poem was really good!
It just was ‘wrong format’, yes?
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i won’t say so since she didn’t specify. but oh well. thanKS FOR THE HELP. she said it was cliche 😥
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Ah, cliche… LOL!
Of course, every patriotic poem needs a couple of zombie, a travesty kangaroo and captain Jack Sparrow 😛
Don’t worry, Stasia, it’s only a school test. Your poem was really good. Not marks estimate poetry, but love of readers. Your readers love your poetry, it’s the main thing!
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hAHAh tHANKS A LOT unbolt. thankfully it’s only a school test. you’re absolutely right
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Yes, being weak is the hardest thing to do. Machismo is easy. 🙂
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Oh… but to resist power of weakness… purr… purr…
It’s the most hard thing, isn’t it? 😉
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Ha ha ha! Yes, you’re so right about that! 😀
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Miyamoto Musashi would agree with the first two lines.
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Oh… I’m so happy!
I wouldn’t want to argue with him and his swords!
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You wrote a Shadorma! Grand job! I love the word “commiserates”, there’s a song called “All The Small Things” that has the word “commiserating” in it, that I like, that I actually listened to earlier today as a creative catalyst for part 2 of my story!
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Ry, thank you! I really liked the Shadorma form!!
And I realized that you’re right… I’ve changed the name of the whole category and the name of the generic tag. I don’t want to confuse my readers again!
I named them ‘Strict poetic forms’ and I will tag my writings only in compliance with its forms!
Thank you again, Ry ❤
Your remark was really useful!
P.S. Aww… 'commiserate'… not in vain I sniffed dust of online dictionaries 😛
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You’re welcome, I thought you’d like it!
Yes, I guess some of us do read tags too lol I think sometimes it gives clues to understanding the poem. Sometimes when I copy/paste stuff, stuff gets copied twice, so I don’t know if stuff can sometimes not get copied too. Wanted to make sure there wasn’t some piece of the poem that got lost, if you write your drafts in a separate document first, like some people do, to save copies of their own work to their own devices! 🙂
P.S.
Correct, it was not in vain! 😛
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(I always learn tags) 😛
Yes, you’re right, it do gives a clue to understanding!
And… hmmm… I’m almost always making a fair copy.
I don’t have drafts practically.
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