A man sags shoulders.
He bears a void in his heart…
such a heavy load.
by TETIANA ALEKSINA
© All rights reserved 2015
A man sags shoulders.
He bears a void in his heart…
such a heavy load.
by TETIANA ALEKSINA
© All rights reserved 2015
unbolt me 
the only space in which void can produce heaviness…love the juxtaposition…great piece
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Juxtaposition is such an effective implement within the writer’s toolkit, don’t you think? 🙂
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yes, indeed…it’s one of my favorites to employ 🙂
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A void in one’s heart can be a heavy load
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Yes, Sheldon…
But sharing a void can alleviate the burden.
Oh… such a strange thought came to my head… we divide zero and get a result that is distinct from zero… Cool, yes?
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what a perfect little slice of feeling
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Thank you very much ❤
(I'm so-so-so sorry for my delay… I'm like Alice in Wonderland now… I have to run really fast just to stay in place)
But I'm happy that I reached your comment finally.
Thank you again ❤
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Empty load is the worst 😥
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You’re right, Mon… it’s the worst and the heaviest load.
Please, take care and bear only light happiness ❤
Your Unbolt
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Thank you ❤
-Your Mon
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I was about to point out that clever contradiction but everyone has already beaten me to it! 😛
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You’re always very welcome here, dear sir 😛
Don’t want to repeat? Write whatever you want!
Hmmmmmm…
‘Portage or portaging is the practice of carrying water craft or cargo over land, either around an obstacle in a river, or between two bodies of water. A place where this carrying occurs is also called a portage’
Cool, yes? 😛
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Oh, I love that contradiction.
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Yes, unity and struggle of opposites… such a plentiful source of inspiration! Thank you, Ashley! I’m always happy to see you here ❤
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Such a contradictory… Void yet heavy…
I’d need a drink before digesting this.
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Edwin…
Alcohol can’t fill a void. Alcohol makes voids more empty. Another fucking contradiction, yes?
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On the other hand, for a brief moment it’d give an illusion of filling you up before the vast emptiness.
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A key word is ‘illusion’ here… A blue pill or a red pill, Neo?
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I’m horrified by the thought of swallowing pills. You have any in syrup form?
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Sure!
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Wonderful my ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
THANK YOU, WALT!
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Спасибі, мій коханий!
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