Let’s see… it’s your soul.
It was delivered to you
at birth as a gift.
What? Why are you so surprised?
The usual birthday gift.
Has your grandmother
ever presented to you…
let us say… mittens?
All grandmothers love to knit
cute motley mittens, I know.
You got your present.
You adore your new mittens
(and your grandmother)
and treat them grandmotherly.
(Oh, what a great word I found!)
You wear them with care.
You scold yourself for foul spots.
You wash and sew up,
any stain and any hole…
Do you remember that day?
You think, ‘Tomorrow!’
You say, ‘It’s a seamy side…’
Fading in the wash,
shrinking, getting out of shape…
Small stuff. The mittens! Big deal!
Where are your mittens?
Now it’s a dirty duster.
It doesn’t fit even
for the second-hand strip mall,
not to speak of paradise…
Quite right, paradise!
What? Why are you so surprised?
You forgot, buddy!
I tell you about your soul.
These mittens are just a trope.
by TETIANA ALEKSINA
© All rights reserved 2015
Love the idea of mittens and grandmother
How life is woven in between
Great piece
As always Sheldon
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Thank you, Sheldon ❤
I wanted to write something warm, cosy… and wise, like grandmother's fairy tales. I hope, I coped with this task.
As always, your Tia.
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We must treat our soul even better than we treat our favorite pair of mittens.
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Yes… you got it completely, Lily!
(Oh… thank you for your letter! I’m so sorry for my delay!
Of course, I’m willing to check your posts and give you my opinion!
But, please, give me a bit of time…)
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beautiful as usual
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Thank you, Stasia ❤
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As far as tropes go, mittens are pretty damn cute! Love this one, Tati! 😀
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Awww… thank you, good sir! 😛
Oh… do you know what ‘mittens’ mean? 😯
Sorry for my silly question… do you wear mittens in Australia?
(silly chuckling and blushing)
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Certainly! We don’t wear those where I am but that’s only because it never gets cold enough during our winters. I wouldn’t be surprised if they do down south though. 😛
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Okay… I know what a gift you get from me this Christmas 😛
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YAY! (I’ll never take them off.)
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Hmmm… in this case I should look for something breathable for you
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Brilliant! love to you…CC
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CC… OMG, thank you ❤
Please, take care!
Always with love,
your Tia
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I love the play between your usual gift ,your soul,then grandmother
Definite string
Love it
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Thank you, Sheldon… thank you so much!
(I did my best) 😛
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How insightful and true! I love the metaphor; very appropriate, to be sure. Thank you for the poignant reminder to me to keep my mittens fit and clean! 😉
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Yes, we can get new mittens… but never a new soul.
Thank you, Jonathan ❤
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Wow! Great job!! ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you, Walt 😀
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❤️❤️❤️
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