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It is like an epic – the warrior’s death as a stand for life, transcribed for the people by lover-as-historian/witness.
(I’m sorry if I got it wrong)
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Actually, I like that take, Claire. I think it’s as valid as any that have been posited so far. 🙂
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This blog is unlike anything I’ve ever seen! Bravo! *claps and cries*
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Aw, thanks, GC! You’re cool for saying so! 😀
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This is so lovely and compelling: “i’d sooner take a bucket to sand
and shovel my life away
than to be without this brave girl”
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Thank you. It’s truly how I felt when I wrote it about the girl in question (and still feel), so I’m very pleased that it spoke to you! 🙂
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So glad to hear that you still feel that way 🙂
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A “trace among fell trees” is a bit vague. Imagery is what poetry is about. I applaud the effort.
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Thank you for your input! 🙂
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Fascinating! Best wishes!
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Bravo! Bellisimo! This poem makes me wish we English language speakers, readers & musician had the same habit as the Spanish language speakers, readers & musicians do so this poem could be sung and the who;e world could hear it! 😉 ❤
Peace, love & poetry for all,
Sherrie
Sherrie Miranda's historically based, coming of age, Adventure novel “Secrets & Lies in El Salvador” is about an American girl in war-torn El Salvador:
http://tinyurl.com/klxbt4y
Her husband made a video for her novel. He wrote the song too:
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Aw, thanks Sherrie! Yeah, I kinda wish I had some musical talent actually. I’d definitely like to turn this a dark folk song of some kind. 😛
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Unbolt,,, Interesting Indeed- I have to admit that it is a hard read for me without understanding,,,, but it renewed a spark deep in my old brain, in a place long forgotten and unused- A spark that followed the flow of the words beyond the words- Images and Imagination renewed- Interesting Indeed- I will have to follow this Unbolt to see what mind adventures it may open up deep inside- Thank You !!!
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You’re very welcome, and thank you for reading! Please do pull up a log and sit by the fire with us! 😀
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