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I like this poem very much and also the other two parts of the pilgrimage that serve as a link for the three main sections of your book Love Death Hell. In this third poem the “it keeps pushing me away” finally disappears. You have expressed this beautifully. I like how the lover leads the first person narrator away from the bus platform. I wonder at these two lines:
“i’ve stood at the stop
awaiting the last bus”
This could have a second reading and be a metaphor for the last journey, which could mean the end of the individual’s life, death, where only love saves this individual. The main message then would be:
Love is what really counts and no more worries as “there’s neither death nor immortality” in the sense our world has made us believe.
This is a great poem to read and reread, beautifully written and highly philosophical.
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Truly, this is a wonderful interpretation of what we wrote, Marta. I think you have the measure of this piece. 😀
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I am glad you like this interpretation because it is important for the final review of the whole book.
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Now we’re quite intrigued! 😉
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So lovely. Best to both of you.
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Thank you! And all our best to you!
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It is awesome. You should do more like this. You inspire me
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Aw, thank you so much! It’s gratifying to know that we’re inspiring other writers out there, so we appreciate you telling us so! 🙂
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Have u seen my blog
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I have indeed. I love the DIY snowman too! 😉
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Thank you
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Thank you
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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There IS peace in love… Amen!
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YAY! 😛
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Reblogged this on chithankalai.
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Thank you very much, sir! 🙂
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Wow Unbolt- I’m almost afraid to touch on this, if feels too sacrosanct. I mean that in all seriousness and was so hesitant to remark beyond the ‘like’. And yet- how can I not? The Lord said, “freely you have received, freely give.” I know this by experience- I would never have known what real love is if I’d never been touched by God/Jesus. He’s always reaching, never pushing away. I pray you never stop seeking Him out- He said if we did so with all our heart we’d find Him. One genuine, personal experience and you’ll never be the same. And while you’ll read and study and genuinely enjoy people and their perspectives, you’ll never feel the need to look beyond Him again. Because you’ll know you’ve found the Meaning-of everything! God bless you on the journey. /Angie
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Thank you for visiting and commenting, Angie! 😀
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Lovely. And love is what all religion should probably be about anyway.
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I couldn’t agree more. And thank you so much for reading! 🙂
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Just … wow!
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Thank you, sir. 😉
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