Dear Readers,
We’re so pleased that we took a risk and began our own little Open-Source Poetry experiment. What if we offered a space for you all to collaborate on a poem together? How would something like that play out? Well, so far it seems you’re having just as much fun as we are!
We received a staggering amount of contributions. Wow, or what! We hadn’t expected this, so we want to give our warmest thank yous for your excellent creative efforts. You have been funny, cute, thought provoking and sad. As a result, we’ve had an enormously difficult time picking the second line for this poem. You all are quite simply brilliant!
So, after some polite debate between us—although there were no fisticuffs, Tati did use a fire rake on Tony as her closing argument—we’ve chosen the line that we feel was the most unexpected and ridiculous. Without further ado, let’s thank Phoenix Risen for his contribution, and invite all of you to the next round!
And for those of you that would like a reminder of how this wonderful little experiment works…
1) We provide the next line of the poem.
2) You write the following line.
3) You submit your line via the comments section of this very post.
4) We pick the line we like most and add it to the poem.
5) We publish every line to date in a follow-up post.
6) Steps 1-5 are repeated until we have a masterpiece!
Hey guys, let’s keep the ball rolling!
What if I said sorry for saying sorry all the time?
Or should I just give you a baby porcupine?
Alas, it will be one and the same outcome
by TETIANA ALEKSINA, TONY SINGLE & PHOENIX RISEN
© All rights reserved 2017
Why don’t you just gulp some whiskey down and close your eyes. voila ! There it is. Phosphoresci 😉
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Oh, so THAT’S how that works! Hee hee! 😛
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Yeahhh , doesn’t it 🙂
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😛
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Not that I am saying that I will say sorry all the time. Let’s just go and have some more of that phosphorus smoke…. Don’t ask me what is that, you silly.
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Aw, but you know I wanna ask, right? Ha ha ha! 😛
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‘Sorry for my rude words’
And here I go again saying sorry’
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Great contribution there. Thanks for playing!
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My name is Sly Unbolt, & I’m very unbolt indeed Sir. An’ I all’as says I’m Unbolt by name, & unbolt by nature!!
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Nice to meetcha, sir! 😛
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For all the spines (or prix) she has – you’d still lack one!!
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Hee hee! Brilliant addition, Tim. Thank you for playing! 😛
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