jesus harold christ
changes a bicycle chain
croaks at ill weather
does not see the stillborn crows
falling out of trees’ bosoms
by TETIANA ALEKSINA
© All rights reserved 2019
jesus harold christ
changes a bicycle chain
croaks at ill weather
does not see the stillborn crows
falling out of trees’ bosoms
by TETIANA ALEKSINA
© All rights reserved 2019
Condensed thought. Nice.
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Thanks so much for reading us! 😀
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We had a gas shortage – due to weather, they say – for a few days in Toronto where stations in my area were completely dry. Driving at nite on a quarter tank it felt apocalyptic. Is this a taste of the future? People fighting like mad dogs just to get the basics?
Nice poem.
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If we keep using up the planet like we are, it could be our future. In fact, many scientists are now saying we’re already beyond the point of no return. It’s a scary thought. Thank you so much for reading!
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We’ll have to adapt. The mutants will win! 😉
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I love these miniatures; there’s something odd and very strange about them; I like the other one too about hurling frisbees 🙂
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AW, thank you, John! We sure had a lot of fun writing ’em! 😉
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There’s this cosmic feeling, like I know something now that I should not.
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Tati’s poetry can sometimes have that effect. 😛
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Hemingway: no unnecessary words. Great poem! Spot on.
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That’s a great assessment of Tati’s work, Kevin. Thanks for reading!
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You always delight…
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That she does, my friend. That she does!
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Beautifully penned 😁
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Thank you for saying so. Tati will be happy to hear it! 🙂
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Wow! Love it.
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It’s a lot of fun, isn’t it? Thanks so much for reading! 🙂
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So That’s what the H means….Mind Blown*
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Hee hee! Yup. It’s just as you say! 😛
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Harold….God must be British then.
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Wot wot? 😛
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No, that’s the son of god you are talking about. The only conclusion you can draw from here is that God may or may not be British. 😛
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Lol
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Needs an umbrella
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Such an elegant solution really. 😛
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