stones shift, tectonic
the mountain’s deep, pulsing heart
more molten than mine
by TETIANA ALEKSINA & TONY SINGLE
© All rights reserved 2018
stones shift, tectonic
the mountain’s deep, pulsing heart
more molten than mine
by TETIANA ALEKSINA & TONY SINGLE
© All rights reserved 2018
unbolt me 
Golden.
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Thank you! 🙂
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I wouldn’t say that I understand u completely because to do that I will hv to stand in ur shoes. But we are all product of our circumstances and urs hv made u a powerful writer. You feel and express strongly in letter. I just wish that ur language was a little more ‘family-friendly’ in ur other posts, if u understand what I mean. 🙂 Thanks for opting to write.
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Thanks for reading us. We appreciate it very much!
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Solid relationships breaking under pressure, eruptions ensue. What wonderful imagery to describe the volatility of breakups, Tony & Tetiana!
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Thank you very muchly, Susi! Love your reading of this! 😀
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Beautiful haiku. I like the comparison between the mountain and its geological processes with the inner processes of the human heart.
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You completely understood the intent of the poem, Marta. Thank you so much for reading and commenting! 😀
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Always my pleasure, Tony. BTW, here is another lovely poem by Mario Savioni: https://savioni.wordpress.com/2016/10/20/the-slow-sauce-of-wood/
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Ooh! Thank you!
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You are welcome. Hope you like it as much as I do.
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more molten than YOURS??? I think not! 🙂
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AW, shucks, Steph!
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