your eyes avoid my face
my face avoids your averted gaze
why should i apologise
by TONY SINGLE
© All rights reserved 2020
your eyes avoid my face
my face avoids your averted gaze
why should i apologise
by TONY SINGLE
© All rights reserved 2020
Your short stirring poetry touched me at a cellular level !
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Aw, seriously, thank you so much! 🙂
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Hi Polyphen! Galathea does not have strabismus!
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😄😄😄
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Wonderful!😍
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Aw, thank you, Florence! 🙂
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Wow! Short and powerful.
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Thank you so much!
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No you shouldn’t. The non-agreeble your face, the better are your chances of survival. It is a made-up fact. But a fact nonetheless.
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As far as made up facts go, I am more than happy to subscribe to that one!
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Yea. I agree. I would not.
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There’s a time and place for everything, of course, but in this case I would not either.
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🙃😉🙂
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Your poetry in three short lines tells the whole story. I feel the intensity. And the writing which is linked has burned a hole in my heart. You are so very talented as a writer, poet, artist and a totally beautiful person .
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Aw, thank you, Summerhill. You are always so very kind to me!
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Yes. This. 100%. I am in this right now with my SO and this is exactly what happens. Beautiful. Wonderfu. Thank you.
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I hope things go better for you soon, my friend. I’m so glad this spoke to you!
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Things will. They always do. I appreciate the sentiment. And this spike to me like nothing has since Junior High and I heard Journey singing about Who’s Crying Now?
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You have excellent taste in music, Jonica. Such a good song! 🙂
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