12 thoughts on “somnus (nrem)”

1. I like the mysticism in the poem. It is multi-layered and has a meaning on a personal as well as a global level. Well-written!

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   • Thank you, Michael! I’m so glad you enjoyed this!

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2. It’s that line, fantastic, the tree of lungs, serving two meanings, two images, one personal, one global

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   • Thank you, Crispina! 😄🙏

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   • 😊​

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3. impressive

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   • Thank you, Rae! 😄🙏

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4. What an image!

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   • I quite agree. We can thank Tati for this one! 😄

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5. This is pure gold:

   “the tree of lungs inside you
   breathes true outside you”

   Very nicely done, you two!

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   • Thank you so much, trE! 😄🙏

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   • You’re most welcome.

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