Their voices are soft and belled.
I feel that I’m stuck inside.
I’m absolutely unshelled
and wide-closed-eyed.
My voice is a tongue of these bells.
It chimes. It’s echoed by walls.
And every one of my fibres and cells
Are blithesome, free-willed thralls.
by TETIANA ALEKSINA
© All rights reserved 2014
Your poems are always so original, I always find it hard not to avoid cliches. Great work 🙂
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Thank you, Mike!
To be honest… I don’t try (specially) to be weird or very original and avantgarde. I just write what I feel… Sometimes I hesitate about a publication 🙂
I’m happy that I found my dear Readers and just friendly people on WordPress! I’m happy that I can show my heart… I can unbolt me 🙂
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I think originality often comes when we connect with our hearts, like you say.
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It’s true! 🙂
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Excellent work once again. You know you’re something special. I hope you know anyway.
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OMG! Michael! I have no words…
Only interjections!
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I like it! I love the idea of being trapped in one’s mind, and waiting to be freed, as I’m sure you know from themes in my own writing. I actually just got down with meditating, though it was guided by a guy named Paul Scheele in an audio recording, so I wasn’t chanting a mantra. With other tapes I listen to, instead of a mantra, I state one of 3 goals I’ve written at the beginning, most often the one I came up with that says “As my willow tree regrows, so does the expanse of and my access to my memory palace”. as if I am going to be trapped in my own head when I write and when I dream, I want it to be a very free environment. The entrance to my memory palace, is a door in a willow tree, in my head. It used to be a dying willow tree, now its a growing one! I’m sort of weird… 🙂
By the way Bold Unbolt, the song I just so happened to be listening to when I read your post, pairs nicely with your words! Cool timing!
“Sword In Mouth, Fire Eyes”
by Norma Jean
We calmly weigh our thoughts before we know them
Careful not to break our only scale
But there’s no lament in taking chances
Fall a little while before we soar
Sword in mouth and helpless in the bond we have between us
Fire eyes and desperate for the helplessness we love
Turn to walk the path in my reflection
But not before the sheep becomes the wolf
Loveless without shame. I was only waiting for the calm before the storm.
The tongue was being sharpened by the lie.
Sword in mouth and helpless in the bond we have between us
Fire eyes and desperate for the helplessness we love
Tell us all the things we need to know now
You’ll find us in the silence of our own guilt
Shout it from the hell below
Shake us but be gentle so
Take our hand walk us through
Take my hand walk me through the land I stole
Help us to lay down
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Ry…
It’s unbelievable! This song just reflects what I felt!
Turn to walk the path in my reflection
But not before the sheep becomes the wolf
Loveless without shame. I was only waiting for the calm before the storm.
The tongue was being sharpened by the lie.
I felt pretty weird when I was writing. I felt like a rapist of words… I wanted to deface them. I wanted to write ‘belled’, ‘unshelled’, ‘echoed’ even without assurance that it exists 🙂
I wanted to sleep, but I couldn’t.
I was fighting with the last line like with the mortal enemy…
Help us to lay down!
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Those words do indeed exist! 🙂 No problem, weird timing happens all the time in my life, and I like to share it sometimes, as it’s an amusing oddity 🙂
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I adore English 🙂
It’s very flexible and polyvariant!
I never know exactly… mostly just feel it 🙂
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Impressively beautiful is this mantra. Love the blithesome free-willed thralls. The essence in your poem has a deeper resonance….immensely impressed.
Stay smiling, Tia.
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Thank you ❤
It was real 🙂
I was sitting on my yoga between boys, and when they started to sing 'Aum'… I was just covered by deep vibrations of their voices! It was a real feeling!
My voice was like a blade of grass between oaks 🙂
And I've caught this thought 'My voice is a tongue of a huge bell'…
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Wow! This is really wonderful to know. “Aum” is the primordial sound and hence its tremendous power. It is sacred among Hindus (Indian). Its originated from Sanskrit.
Amazed at your blissful experience. Stay Smiling!
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My Dearest Hatter, so lovely! My favorite lines,
“I’m absolutely unshelled
and wide-closed-eyed.”
I will use this mantra this evening, if you don’t hear from me tomorrow, I have found the path to Nirvana!
Always,
Alice ♥
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Thank you, my lovely Alice! ❤
Please, enjoy your evening and your journey to Nirvana 🙂
You can be calm… You can't be lost there.
Remember, I'm always near you.
My voice is Ariadne's thread for you.
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The most holy thread in the universe! Thank you, how lovely, very beautiful! I will take your voice with me into the maze of the unknown. Please have a wonderful evening!
Yours,
Alice ❤
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My body leaves you now, Alice.

But this clew stays with you… Have a big evening, Alice!
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Please find the path to my dreams, I will leave landmarks for you to find your way!
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Ooooooh yeah!!
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Oh, I’m happy that my dearest reader liked this one!
I hesitated about choosing of words… it sounded pretty oddly in my head 🙂
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Please always write what you feel and don’t ever second guess yourself! You know I’m here for you always and want to make your dreams come true! Hugs and kisses my sweet 🙂 I miss you 🙂
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I miss you too… Hellish time difference!
I sleep when you have free time, I work when you sleep and I have free time when you work 😛
Good night! 🙂
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Good night and sweet dreams! H&K
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H&K ❤
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Oh my sweet, lots of sweet kisses and warm hugs ❤
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