Did you not compel me
with your fertile landscape
to conceive a thought
of acquiescence
That I may touch heaven
if only for an hour
as your ripening buds
surrendered to my touch
Did you not propel me
with your servile hand to nape
to embolden in need
this quickening
An action birthed
with a pregnant pause
as your seasons
unfolded before me

You did not repel me
But let me lay a while
In your delicate layers
As we blossomed together


© All rights reserved 2015

81 thoughts on “Ripening

  1. Both of you did brilliant work here, guys! I’ve tried erotic stuff once and know how tricky it can be… but you found this subtle balance between innocence and seduction. You created a real masterpiece… WOW… Just WOW!

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    • daffnginger, thank you. Yes, often a little bit of effort and care are required when constructing one of these, and especially when there are two people involved. I’m glad this worked out as well as it did, although Annie needs to take much of the credit this time. 🙂

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