someone had a notion to peregrinate
that someone got potted, got someone else laid
i faked a riveted smile then poked my nose
resolutely into my tummy button
the passersby took their morbid snapshots
each burst extracting the soul from time
still i did not change my compromised pose
i had no use for these silly social critiques
i took a pen and unbolted my daybook
i wrote this heading: “how i lost my summer”
buried myself alive under the rose
in hopes of rising from the grave by fall
by TETIANA ALEKSINA & TONY SINGLE
© All rights reserved 2016






I could sit here and just don’t go to work and take the hints of all the gossips of your words hahaha. I absolutely love your blog and your ideas.
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Yeah, why not? Just stay home and take a protracted ramble through our little blog maze here. You never know where you might end up! 😛
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hahahahahah you made me laugh!
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Hee hee! 😛
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what an amazing poem . beautiful!!!!!!
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Thank you, Monique! 🙂
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np sweetheart
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I love this poem and the palindrome title is genius. I just picture it reading backwards and forwards forever like a snake devouring it’s own tail. Or like a game of pong where the paddles are lined up at 90 degree angles. Nice work!
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Martin, you got it completely right. That’s exactly how it’s meant to be read! We’re so glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for visiting and commenting! 🙂
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Septemberdays
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You get a cigar too! 😉
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Nice ❤
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Thank you! 😀
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Love this ! The structure, the lattice and how those words are bouncing .
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Yeah, you’re right. Hee hee! 🙂
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I thought the title was a typo when it first appeard on my reader feed. The flow of writing was so flawless.
Loved it. Good that I had kept a google dictionary add-on. Learnt a new word or two. 🙂
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We did wonder how people might react to the title. We’re glad it didn’t stop you from reading anyway. Thanks so much! 😛
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Very nice work! And an intriguing title… From the Ouroboros, perhaps, with the “S” as the Serpent? Just curious! All the best to you, as always
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You got it in one, Jonathan! And all the best to you, my friend! We appreciate your support more than we could ever say! 😀
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you are an incrdible writer
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Aw, thanks so much! We love what we do! 😀
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Oh wow…(hidden in plain sight)…September days…(nice)…brilliant (love it)😀😀
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Yes, “September days” was Tati’s brilliant idea. I wish I’d have thought of it! 😛
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