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Liking this one lots! (also the teacher is right 🙂 )
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He most certainly was. His advice has certainly improved the rhythm of that line, that’s for sure! 🙂
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This is beautiful. ❤
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Thank you so much! 😀
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Docks and kisses 🙂
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😛
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Loved that, brilliantly done! I would happily read more poetry if it was written like that 🙂
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We’re certainly trying out more poetry of this sort because it’s really a lot of fun to write, I can tell you. 😀
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So many fresh images give thunder to the mind…nice…like.
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Thunder to the mind… now I love that! Thank you so much for reading, my friend! 😀
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I hear guitar chords with this – it should be a song.
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We’d love to turn this into a song, believe me. It could be great as one, I reckon! 😀
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So what’s stopping you? Grab a guitar and…
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I’m a bit tone deaf, I’m afraid. I also don’t have enough fingers! 😛
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What about Tati? Could she “lend you her ears” and some fingers, too?
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What do you reckon, Tati? 😉
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Beautiful!
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Blush!
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sweet! enjoyed it much 🙂
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Thanks, Willow! It was fun to write! 😀
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lovely ❤
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Thank you! 🙂
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Loved the poem, Very reminiscent of about three poets. But you did it well.
May I play the old school teacher bit again?
the line in this couplet
“we kissed on a jetty ’tween shanties bareheaded
where summer’s moorings are a web of ropes threaded”
doesn’t quite go with the rythm.
May I suggest,
“we kissed on a jetty ’tween shanties bareheaded
where moorings in summer are webs of ropes threaded”
Paol Soren
https://paolsoren.wordpress.com/
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Hi, Paolo! Your suggestion was so spot on that we were compelled to include it. Thank you so much for steering us aright on this!
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