your black silhouette
is a tremendous keyhole
etched against the door
it is a pity
that I never could reach the
three-legged table
by TETIANA ALEKSINA
© All rights reserved 2017
your black silhouette
is a tremendous keyhole
etched against the door
it is a pity
that I never could reach the
three-legged table
by TETIANA ALEKSINA
© All rights reserved 2017
unbolt me 
One of your best poetry I’ve ever read. Your imagery reminded me a lot of Lewis Carroll.
I think you’d paid him a fine tribute and respects. Excellent writing and my favorite by you. 🙂
P.S Hope you stop by my 2nd part 2 of my poem. If you haven’t read the first part. You should…It’s a cryptic mystery to where its all going to lead, connect and come together. See you on my blog.
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Awesome! I love seeing what you come up with next, Charlie. It’s always a treat! 😀
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🙂
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Nice novel-based poem with an original version. I like how you have constructed the images. It is a poem that mainly speaks of impossibitly. Its openness allows multiple interpretations: someone you love(d) but did not allow to be reached, for instance, or any kind of thing that could/ cannot be achieved in life. BTW, I enjoyed Lewis Carroll’s novel very much and I recommnend you to read it.
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I really ought to read it to be honest. I wonder if Tati has…
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This is one of your best ones, guys (in my humble opinion)!
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Take a bow, Tati. You earned it! 😀
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Both you did!
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This is one of the best pieces I’ve read related to Alice in Wonderland. Such witty use of the reference. Commendable.
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On behalf of the Tatster, I wanna thank you. I really quite liked this one too, and I’ve never even read Lewis Carroll’s original work!
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