I like this little story. In just six words you have been able to express a lifetime. Love this concision. In Spanish there is a saying your six-word-story reminds me of: “De las aguas mansas me libre Dios”, which literally means: God free me from still waters (although you do not seem to be a great god believer, haha, at least according to the poems of your new book Love Death Hell. Finished the Hell section and loved it. Will send you and Tati feedback soon). What I wanted to say… ah, yes… the equivalent saying to the Spanish one in English would be: still waters run deep. I think your story expresses exactly that. Am I right?
I love that saying, Marta! And as for whether or not this short story expresses that, I think you could be right. (Can’t wait to read your feedback for our new book!) 😀
unbolt me 
It’s the dead ones that haunt. 🙂
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And make people wet their pants with fear! 😮
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I like this little story. In just six words you have been able to express a lifetime. Love this concision. In Spanish there is a saying your six-word-story reminds me of: “De las aguas mansas me libre Dios”, which literally means: God free me from still waters (although you do not seem to be a great god believer, haha, at least according to the poems of your new book Love Death Hell. Finished the Hell section and loved it. Will send you and Tati feedback soon). What I wanted to say… ah, yes… the equivalent saying to the Spanish one in English would be: still waters run deep. I think your story expresses exactly that. Am I right?
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I love that saying, Marta! And as for whether or not this short story expresses that, I think you could be right. (Can’t wait to read your feedback for our new book!) 😀
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Reading the Death section now.
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Nice
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Thanks! 🙂
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Eerie. True.
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Very! 😉
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It’s six if you use it’s. Pass me another hair to split. Nice . Chris T.
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Hee hee hee. That’s a fair point, Chris. Thanks heaps for reading! 😛
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2 words: Really good!
Thank you!
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Thank you! 😀
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Yes!
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😛
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Love this one.
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Thank you! 😀
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be glad the invisible ones don’t
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No, they just steal your stuff and give you the tickles from time to time. 😛
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The dead reveal the undeniable truth.
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Oh my, yes! 😛
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