Wow, these words sound to me very erotic. So much can be contained in just six words. Hope I am not misinterpreting the idea of this six word story? It just made me automatically think of sexual desire. I also connected it with the same kind of sexual desire Mario Savioni’s character, 54-year-old Frank might feel when attracted to a beautiful young woman called Nicole who is only 19. What are the chances of a love relationship with such huge difference? Mario writes about all this brilliantly. I really recommend you and the rest of the followers here to read his very short chapters of his novel “Pickles and Tarts”: “Frank closed his eyes. He pictured Nicole. He wanted to get closer, to smell her mouth, to draw his tongue across her teeth and run his fingers through her hair. He could only imagine how she might smell, but however she smelled, he didn’t care. He only knew that she would be fresh to him.” Link to story: https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/01/22/pickles-and-tarts-chapter-3/
Short, sweet, packs a gut punch.
Ah, sweet chemistry.
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Thanks so much!
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Wow, these words sound to me very erotic. So much can be contained in just six words. Hope I am not misinterpreting the idea of this six word story? It just made me automatically think of sexual desire. I also connected it with the same kind of sexual desire Mario Savioni’s character, 54-year-old Frank might feel when attracted to a beautiful young woman called Nicole who is only 19. What are the chances of a love relationship with such huge difference? Mario writes about all this brilliantly. I really recommend you and the rest of the followers here to read his very short chapters of his novel “Pickles and Tarts”: “Frank closed his eyes. He pictured Nicole. He wanted to get closer, to smell her mouth, to draw his tongue across her teeth and run his fingers through her hair. He could only imagine how she might smell, but however she smelled, he didn’t care. He only knew that she would be fresh to him.” Link to story: https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/01/22/pickles-and-tarts-chapter-3/
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He’s such a brilliant writer. I’m glad you brought our attention to this, Marta. Thank you! 😀
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You are kindly welcome! 😀
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Great I like but I need to sit down and work it all out. Who does what. I have OCD and ADHD. Thanks
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Take your time, my friend. Our words are here for as long as you need! 🙂
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Haha niiice! 😉
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Fanks! 😛
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Bless choux for this
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Hee hee hee. Thank you! 😉
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Be still, my trembling treacle tart.
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Ha! Love what you did there! 😉
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my arrow loosed, found the mark
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Oh my! 😮
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