a lunger on a hospital sheet
embraces the last spring
bursts into blossom with scarlet poppies
with every coughing fit
by TETIANA ALEKSINA
© All rights reserved 2019
a lunger on a hospital sheet
embraces the last spring
bursts into blossom with scarlet poppies
with every coughing fit
by TETIANA ALEKSINA
© All rights reserved 2019
Her imagery is so lovely, even with something so terrible.
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It’s quite a talent to do that, don’t you think? 😉
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Yes!!! I love the way both of you write. So different, yet both with so much depth.
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Strange, to say the least, but I like it. I have read it several times and “feel” it more each time I read it. Well done!
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Thanks so much, Rae. Tati’s going to love your kind words!
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That was a wonderful juxtaposition of illness with spring. So imaginative!
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I have trouble keeping up with her creativity at times, that’s for sure. Thank you for reading! 😀
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You are doing great with your creativity! Absolute pleasure to read your poems😊
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flowery paradox syntax 🌹
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Yup indeed! 😉
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Wow so beyond my courage to go…
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She’s the very definition of courage, that’s for sure. Thanks very much for reading! 😀
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She’s such a talent. Are your blogs linked? Does she see the wonderful things I say about her and her poetry and hilarity? I swear I am following her but I only ever see posts from this blog! Does she know I am a fan????
So many questions! !!!!
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Hey Fiery! How are you? Yup, the blogs are linked, and we are also equal creative partners on both! So, we put all our writings here, and we do all of our comic stuff over on the other site. And, although she’s usually as quiet as a mouse, Tati does see your wonderful comments and she does appreciate them very very much. 🙂
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Hey so sorry for my ridiculously delayed reply.
Okay good , I’m so happy to know that. Didn’t want you taking all the lovely praise I shower upon these here wonderful word creations of yours! ♡
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Aw, methinks it’s time to blush again! We’re pretty big fans of your word creations too, y’know! 😉
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Aw…
I knew that…but I like to hear it lol
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Well, you’ll hear it from us a lot! 🙂
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Going morbid, guys, but I still love you!
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Hee hee. That’s a perfectly understandable response. Hopefully the next post will be more to your liking! 🙂
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I didn’t say I didn’t like it! It’s clever and well crafted.
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Measles?
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Not quite. 😉
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You are unbelievable!!! This poem should be written into nurse course manual to remind them life is poetic
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Not a bad idea actually! I wonder if they’d do it? 😛
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I am sure they appreciate it during their intense training.
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Stand well back and admire!
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Way, waaa-aaa-aaay back!
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