if theirs was the path not followed
then how could we have ever known
of their hopes veiled, atwist in shame
yet now we know
departing eden saved our lives
from the tyrant we thought we knew
meta alpha spitting swords of flame
pious choirs cleaved to the throne
he churned their psalms into a voice of ruin
his shadow sloped through every heartland
so now we know
that whenever he swore to bury us
each variance of will collapsed their brains
they tore themselves on the teeth that hound
we truly blest have truly moved on
presuming to carry gentle our selves
’til we wake to say the soft parts loud
it’s all we know
that if you’re enough then i am too
so will you be my hello for the last time
and tell everyone i love them
by TONY SINGLE
© All rights reserved 2022
What a beautiful poetry 💭✍🏾👌🏾
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You are so kind. Thank you! 😄
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This is so beautiful. The emotion behind your words is amazing. Thank you for sharing with us!
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Thank you so much for reading me. I really appreciate your kind words!
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Of course 😊
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I hold my breath while thinking of the precise response to this. And before my lungs explode in want of air, I say: WOW!
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I’m very flattered, Crispina! Thank you so much for your wonderful response! 😄
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While we all like to gain *likes*, as a writer, I know how important the comments are
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The comments are SO important. We’re not ashamed to say that we certainly thrive on them!
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Yea, as I do, both here & on Twitter
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This is really great, I liked it a lot. especially the part of leaving Eden and that of the tyrant.
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Thank you, Michael. I’m glad this resonated with you!
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Very nice.
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Thank you so much!
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Wonderful rhymes here. Thanks 🙂
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Much appreciated! 😄
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Curious. Thanks for sharing it.
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Thank you for reading it, Tim!
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“meta alpha spitting swords of flame…” Brilliant!
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Thank you, good sir! Not even sure how I thought of this! 😅
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I think it couldn’t have been forced. Some of our best phrases, sentences, etc. are simply dreamy miracles that emerge unbidden from whatever the hell our minds are.
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I think you couldn’t be more right about that!
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Love this.
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Thank you, Fraggle! 😊
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I’ll take the Fifth on this one, Tony.
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Nevertheless, I thank you for taking the time to read, Dolly. I truly appreciate it!
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But of course, darling. The pleasure is mine.
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