My first (and unexpected) collaboration

It’s not a verse, actually. Rather, it’s a creative flow. It was started just out of the blue. I didn’t realize that we had started until the third strophe. It was an open start, and we decided to leave an open final because this dance can’t be finished…

Thank you, Kasey, for such an amazing experience! Will you dance with me again?


I’m like water. Water of life… Water of death… I’m just flowing and dissolving all that I meet. While you float into eternity in the currents of time, I’m the rocks beneath the surface. Silent, worn and still. I’m singing, I’m dancing, I’m playing with a pebble. I’m tickling your rocky heels and smoothing your rough pleats. Shadows waving over us as the wind dances with the tall grass along the shore, taming the sun’s heat. Earth’s ballet going unnoticed. It’s going unnoticed… We are involved in our dance. A passionate bolero is whirling us. A dance of Water and Stone. All other things don’t make sense. Hear the sounds of a soothing melody, so lovely and bright. Guiding us towards desires held tight. Somebody says that it’s a battle. A wave was broken, a rock was bitten… But it is only silly tattle. Moving to the rhythm of the currents, we’ve danced our way downstream. Polished enough to reflect her beauty back at her, we drift, soaked in moonlight. The rhythm becomes faster… the song becomes free… the brilliant variations, the giddy pirouettes. Enchanted moon looks down on our silhouettes. Spiraling into eternity, the sound echos through and through. Giving the greatest view, our movements were laid down within the stars…

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37 thoughts on “My first (and unexpected) collaboration

  1. Standing Ovation! Beautiful and magical dance, Tia….. “Spiraling into eternity, the sound echos through and through.
    Giving the greatest view, our movements were laid down within the stars…” OH OHOH OH….No words so just filling innnnnnnnnn. Instantly in love….mean love at first read. Million Hugs to you. Thank you for sharing this. Stay smiling and stay dancing! 🙂

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    • Thank you, my dear dancer on the water Reva 🙂
      I’m not a great dancer to be honest… especially twosome 🙂
      But I got a really empathetic partner!

      Million Hugs and Smiles back!

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    • I’ll do all my best!
      And I’m looking forward the reaction of my collaborator… it’s a surprise for him. I hope, a good surprise 🙂
      I want that he saw these beautiful comments, because they are not only for me but and for him.

      Thank you!
      Your smile, Tia.

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    • Oh, I am utterly sorry….I should mention that all the appreciation is for both of you. It would be unfair to praise the half. Please convey my gladness to him too. Love the work in complete sense…..including both the talented poets here.

      Stay wonderful….both of you. 🙂

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    • You’re a great friend, Reva, thank you! 🙂
      I convey your gladness to him necessarily! Wow! I’m happy!
      I want to help him to believe in yourself… it’s the main goal of this post… I hope that he will start to write again.

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