Did you not compel me
with your fertile landscape
to conceive a thought
of acquiescence
That I may touch heaven
if only for an hour
as your ripening buds
surrendered to my touch
Did you not propel me
with your servile hand to nape
to embolden in need
this quickening
An action birthed
with a pregnant pause
as your seasons
unfolded before me
You did not repel me
But let me lay a while
In your delicate layers
As we blossomed together
by PIXIEANNIE & TONY SINGLE
© All rights reserved 2015
unbolt me 
Hauntingly beautiful, evocative words on passion! Love it, both of you.
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Thank you, rebel1955. It’s very cool of you to say! 😀
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Love that!
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Thank you! 😉
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Excellent job! It’s such an easy thing to get wrong as you mentioned, but here you hit a home run.
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I’ll put most of that down to Annie’s fine efforts, Hyperion. Thank you so much! 😀
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My pleasure Tony! Tip of the hat to Annie as well. 😀
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Brilliant! 👏👏
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WOOHOO! (Thank you.) 😀
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This is really sweet and charming. That last stanza is basically perfect in terms of both language and positioning!
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That positioning of that last stanza was a happy little accident on Annie’s part. I’m quite glad that happened now! 😀
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I do so love my happy little accidents as they usually tie everything together rather nicely. Who doesn’t want to blossom with another?
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Exactly. I think that’s kind of what we all were made for really!
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So lovely… The concept is beautiful ^_^
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Yes, it’s quite a compelling scene to unfold and explore, isn’t it? 🙂
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Yes it is 🙂
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Both of you did brilliant work here, guys! I’ve tried erotic stuff once and know how tricky it can be… but you found this subtle balance between innocence and seduction. You created a real masterpiece… WOW… Just WOW!
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Aw, thank you, Tati. That means so much coming from you! I’m glad you enjoyed this effort by Annie and I. Are you ready for more collaborations soon? I’ve got a hankering to work with you on something else! 😉
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Always ready! 😛
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YAY! ❤
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Beautiful! Words aren’t always easy to string together. But with a irreplaceable moment and some practice, masterpieces are created. This is one of those.
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daffnginger, thank you. Yes, often a little bit of effort and care are required when constructing one of these, and especially when there are two people involved. I’m glad this worked out as well as it did, although Annie needs to take much of the credit this time. 🙂
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This is fantastic. What a lovely collaboration.
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Thank you, Electra! 😀
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natural sensuality laid out made complete
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Thanks, EDC. That’s very cool of you to say! 😀
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