Did you ever stop to think
that the world might not be round
or if pigs can really fly because
I’ve only seen them on the ground
did you ever stop to think
that the sky might not be blue
or if money grows on trees
would we know just what to do
did you ever stop to think
that a heart could really break
or if dogs are really man’s best friend
that we ought to feed them steak
did you ever stop to think
that we forgot how to be kind
or if miracles do really happen
that our greed it made us blind
did you ever to stop to think
that love might not be in the air
or if crocodiles can really cry
that it’s never too late to care
by PIXIE ANNIE
© All rights reserved 2016
Very clever.
A sharply written poem. Good use of metaphor too.
Thank you for the work x
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Oh, Annie’s gonna love you for that kind comment, Adhuntell. 🙂
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did you ever stop to think
that we forgot how to be kind
or if miracles do really happen
that our greed it made us blind
The message in this poem rings truth in all the right places. The whole poem is excellent and very well written.
Love this a lot. 🙂
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Yes, there’s a lot of truth packed in there, Charlie! 😉
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This is why I loved. The truth. 🙂
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Yes.
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🙂
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Love this! And yes we need to stop and think… See the consequences of our actions. See the truths that are presented and see if true or false.
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Well put, Mia! 🙂
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I have absolutely no idea how can I share a poem that I made but I hope I can share here..
https://ricaalcaraz2331.wordpress.com/2015/12/07/what-is-magic/ Magic
https://ricaalcaraz2331.wordpress.com/2015/12/09/sleep/ Sleep
mediocre work but yeah lol
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Thank you, Rica. We’ll be sure to let you know what we think soon! 😉
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Okay that made me nervous lol.. But thanks 🙂
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The last 2 pargraphs are the most amazing…thanks fr writing such post
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There’s certainly a lot of wisdom there, don’t you think? 🙂
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