pruning and gnawing at the gyrus of my numbed mind
a shadow enters the room, and it sits behind
it grinds a mudded heel into sheer night’s tail
filling my head with a gluey fairy-tale
it takes away the caulking gun from my ear
claps on my shoulder, asks with barefaced jeer
“are you dreaming of being a writer, you silly boy?
headache, restless nights, burnout… enjoy!”
by TETIANA ALEKSINA
© All rights reserved 2017






I liked the adjective “gluey.” That really added texture to the piece and it also set up the adhesive nature for your caulking gun.
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Tati loves the descriptive words, that’s for sure. Thanks for visiting with us! 😀
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Cool poem, she needs a snake.
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I guess a packet of candy snakes won’t exactly cut it, huh? 😛
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Nope 😊
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Like this. Had to laugh when you spoke about dreaming about being a writer.
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Ha ha! I know what you mean, Debbie. Thanks for visiting us and reading! 😀
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I think I’ve had this dream. 😃
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It feels like one I may have had too. A bit disconcerting really! Thanks for reading, Karissa. 🙂
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I am starting to understand and sympathize with your writings 😱. I need help, am I going insane?
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Hee hee hee! No. Not at all. It does mean you’re becoming one of us though… 😉
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I thought there was a double entendre there! Ok, I’ll get my mind out of the gutter! lol..:)
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I’m sure I have no idea what you’re talking about. Hee hee. 😉
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Pretty much accurate. Lol
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Oh my, yes. Writing can be such a horror movie! 😛
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Cool!!
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On Tati’s behalf, I thank you! 🙂
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It’s not so much the burn out
it’s the caulking gun in you ear
Hello writing ain’t anything
But the image you put forth
I’d buy a ticket to watch that
I would you silly snot
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We’ll save a seat for you, Sheldon! 🙂
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Nice!
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Thanks for reading, Jon! 🙂
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No problem Tony!
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