you slip through my fingers into the sand
and make a trail in speckle and spick
the prints of your limbs a lost dna strand
sprigs pop in your wake, magic and mayhem
ocean waves give your feet a slavish lick
comets swirl to give form your diadem
in this moment i am the creator
sower of dreams, bringer of time’s tick
standing at the edge of heaven’s crater
by TETIANA ALEKSINA & TONY SINGLE
© All rights reserved 2019
unbolt me 
Damned fine wordidge sir (or miss, sorry if correction required!)
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You got it right on both counts, my friend! A gal and a guy both worked on this little poem. And thank you for your kind assessment of it! 😉
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There are some really satisfying phrases in here, I really enjoyed it.
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Thank you very much, Miss K Zebra! 😀
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I don’t get it, where’s spock ?
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He’s sitting this one out. Gone for a coffee at Denny’s. 🙂
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and I thought he was a Perkin’s man, damn, lost that bet…
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nature has a way of allowing our dreams to trickle into being, don’t they. I am happy that you find birth of ideas on your walks…on the beach, seems like. 🙂
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Pretty much anywhere really. Ideas come whenever and wherever they please! Thanks so much for reading, Steph! 😀
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Heaven’s crater, hell above. Where go your friends?
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Maybe to the local Denny’s for a midnight snack? 😛
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Lol….only you Tony is capable of such riddle. You make an action word into a brilliant poem.
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Hee hee. It was fun for sure! 😛
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Blinking ‘eck, love that rhythm. 🙂
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We’ve just gotta blush a little bit now… (Thank you!) 😛
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🙂
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That was stunning. Gorgeously written!
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Thank you so much! 😀
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Of course!
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hmmmm
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🙂
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I have followed that site too…. nice to hear your voice tony, I love art and you people are interesting
http://www.poet99.com
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Thank you so much! You’re a writer of poetry yourself… Nice!
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WOW
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Aw, you’re trying to make us blush, aren’t you?
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YES
but also just
WOW.
Cosmically wondrous stuff that goes from micro cosmos to universe always gets me. You guys are so cool ♥♡♥
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You’re pretty cool yourself, Fiery! And, yes, we love that microcosmos to bigger universe stuff. Totally rocks our stargazing socks! 😛
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LOL!
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