you wake at night
when first snow has tucked the city in
and neon glow has plucked glam rings
into the supercilious dark
you see outside
something shaggy and stark wants in
presses craggy nose, sharp tightening
unto the chilled window pane
you rush through the door
jump up bare to the porch sans clogs
and december like a debauched dim dog
licks your cheek with frosty tongue
by TETIANA ALEKSINA & TONY SINGLE
© All rights reserved 2019
The next word after supercilious (at least in my dictionary) is superficial. supercilious superficial is a complete description for someone or something.
Love your language and your poetry. Thank you.
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Ha! Yes! I like that association! 😊
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I enjoyed this poem and you taught me a new word – supercilious! I had to look it up but I made note of it. It is a good word and bears repeating.
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I love stumbling across new words too! Language is so much fun, and I love to expand my vocabulary!
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Now I have to get my dictionary out (yes a real dictionary with real paper pages that can be read as I book) and look up that word too.
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I love looking up new words! So much fun! 😊
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“supercilious dark” clever and fresh
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Welcome winter.
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The unwelcome house guest! 😛
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Agree with Em.
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Thanks, Dolly. 🙂
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My pleasure!
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Its only flaw is it’s too short, but even that works for a poem that hurries us along through the chill of December. I liked this very much, and I hope you write more. I’ll be including some of my poetry on my blog, too.
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Awesome! It’ll be cool to read your efforts, Malcolm! 😀
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“december like a debauched dim dog”. Lovely.
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Thank you, Em!
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I love it! It’s so December-ish ❤
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Just in time for Christmas too! 😛
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