a slip of flame wags like a red-tailed fox
o’er candlewick sill in the moonlight box
sets ghost birds aflight in lucent flocks
o’er vespertine forest and druidic rocks
the road yonder runs thither throughout the ages
its footprints tell the story of hatchling sages
from trees bedangled with their birthing cages
open, in spirals, zig-zagging in stages
no questions, no answers, just a mystery play
of knotted roots, weaved wood and branching splay
and the thin, shrill cry of a sleepless jay
from dusk covered verdure and vertebrae
by TETIANA ALEKSINA & TONY SINGLE
© All rights reserved 2021
“just a mystery play of knotted roots” is it the earthly thing or the metaphorical truth? Either ways am intrigued by its verbose.. 😌
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In this case, it could be either. That’s how mysterious we like to be. 😉
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😄
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Love the rhythm of this. Kinda stamping, making a statement. Wonderful word choices
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Thank you, Crispina! 😀
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🙂
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That’s one fine wordpicture- ‘hatchling sages’ is inspired. (Knocked me off my perch there!)
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Hope it didn’t knock you off it too hard! But we’re flattered nonetheless! 😁
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❤️️
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Not quite sure why, but something about this reminds me of Björk. Maybe it’s just the word “vespertine”? But I think it’s something else, too.
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Man, I’ve gotta familiarise myself with some of her work. Which album would you recommend I listen to first?
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Oh, there are so many! Her earlier stuff is a lot more poppy ( ‘Debut’; ‘Post’).
My personal fave is ‘Medulla’. There are no instruments- just voice. But those voices ( she gets lots of guest vocalists/ beatboxers etc on) really sound like instruments most of the time. ( Mike Patton makes a contribution to it, too, which is exciting for me 🙂 ).
But ‘Vespertine’ is gorgeous. ‘Homogenic’ is a fave, too. Anyway, I could go on and on, lol. I hope you find some tracks that you really dig!
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Thank you so much. I’ll definitely be checking her out! I’ve heard so many good things about her! 😄
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