if theirs was the path not followed
then how could we have ever known
of their hopes veiled, atwist in shame
yet now we know
departing eden saved our lives
from the tyrant we thought we knew
meta alpha spitting swords of flame
pious choirs cleaved to the throne
he churned their psalms into a voice of ruin
his shadow sloped through every heartland
so now we know
that whenever he swore to bury us
each variance of will collapsed their brains
they tore themselves on the teeth that hound
we truly blest have truly moved on
presuming to carry gentle our selves
’til we wake to say the soft parts loud
it’s all we know
that if you’re enough then i am too
so will you be my hello for the last time
and tell everyone i love them
by TONY SINGLE
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Thank you for visiting my blog. I am here checking out yours now. Departing Eden is a thought provoking piece. I clicked over to middling grace as well. I disagree with the viewpoint, but I appreciate opening the doors to think on these things. 🙂
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Thanks so much for visiting with us, Laura! It’s much appreciated!
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I tink to the we bit and bitting this tony
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Thanks so much for reading!
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Interesting. All about the walkout from Eden
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You totally get it! 😉
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So nice
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Thank you very much, Madan!
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Excellent write and picture,Tony.
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You are very kind, Anita! Thank you! 😄
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Pleasure,Tony.
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amazing 😍
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Thank you, Muhammad! 😄
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