should you ever leave
all air will void from this room
all days will follow
& i won’t know what to be
this hell on earth behind thee
if i hold this space
& leave the light on for you
fain would you come home
should you not return
with hope or fire’s foreboding
into pinpricked night
would i not slingshot myself
to find you & bring you home
if i never pray
i might never say goodbye
fain never lose you
should i lose my way
ghost into pain with a smile
then remember me
bid thee well a dying sun
circle an emergent moon
if i plead the void
to swallow the void in me
fain would i be free
by TONY SINGLE
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Nice
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Thank you!
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This filled with sadness, reminds me of ancient Chinese poetry, strange, but has resemblance. Enjoy reading it and feeling it.
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Thank you, Carrie. That really is quite the compliment! I had no idea that I might be evoking such comparisons so that makes me very happy to learn!
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You are quite a genius in writing, if you don’t already know.
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Seriously, you are very kind. I really appreciate that! 😊
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💚
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Exceptionally well done and begging to be sung.
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Thank you, Dolly. One day, I’ll make it happen somehow!
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You are very welcome, Tony.
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I have to agree, it would make a fantastic song
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