that city was tricky and loved the dead end sign
but for those who knew, it was e’er a passageway
‘tween sticks of tired buildings pretending at trees
to mountain vistas yonder tired men’s dreams
for those that dared creaky boards o’er abysses
dared to leap along ridges of breathy abandon
the arms of poseidon awaited to enfold them
to convey them to rest in the mariana trench
and there, o’er the dilapidated city wall
with a huge azure unblinking graffiti eye
a briny crown of plumes with duplicitous sparkles
received the tired orisons of artless denizens
by TETIANA ALEKSINA & TONY SINGLE
© All rights reserved 2024
Well done, Tony.
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Thank you kindly, Dolly!
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My pleasure, darling.
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“the arms of poseidon awaited to enfold them
to convey them to rest in the mariana trench…”. Original and powerful lines, and the rest of the poem, no less striking.
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Thank you, Tash. You’re so very kind!
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Wow that first line is a hot one! Well done!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Oh the ocean so bleak and dangerous but fresh and mysterious!
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Both inviting and treacherous. So true!
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Stirring, lovely language.
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Thank you so much! 😊🙏
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