I just took 2 lemon-orange pound cakes out of the oven, and now I’m working on dinner: smothered okra with steak, bacon, okra in a sort of brown “salsa gravy”. Come on over, I’ll serve you up a big plate!
Yes. It’s so clear they have drifted apart to the point that they have labeled each other–a point it’s difficult to return from. And who knows what each is really like. Is she independent or unable to accept love? Is he loving or clingy? And “tuts” and “whispers” speak volumes, too.
It really is nearly perfect. Every word makes you ask questions.
unbolt me 
Here you go:
https://behinddistantdoors.wordpress.com/2016/02/29/all-about-you/
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Ooh! Thank you, Azul! Great job! 🙂
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You’re welcome–and thank YOU, it was fun!
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It’s strange this six-word thing …plenty you think yeah okay…and then you get one that grabs you…just like this one!
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Thank you, my friend. I really appreciate that! 🙂
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Now THIS is good! I’ll work on one later–I’m baking/cooking like a madwoman… 🙂
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Ooh! What are you making? 🙂
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I just took 2 lemon-orange pound cakes out of the oven, and now I’m working on dinner: smothered okra with steak, bacon, okra in a sort of brown “salsa gravy”. Come on over, I’ll serve you up a big plate!
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Holy moly! I’m walking across the ocean as we speak… 😛
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Hahahahahaha–wish you could, you’re too cute, Tony!!
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Aw, shucks!
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Forgot to mention that “smothered okra” is then served over rice–a southern dish here in the USA, and truly “heaven on a plate” (or bowl)!
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Yup. I’m officially drowning in my own drool right now… 😛
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Hahahahaha, you’re cracking me up good today! Have to admit it smells so good, but it has to cook down “real tender”…
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ARRRGGGH! I need to go and check what’s in my fridge now… 😛
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Probably something “healthy”, eh?
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Regrettably, yes. 😛
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Hahaha–I knew it–you’re missing out here, buddy!
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Will post my 6-word story at 1 am, my time–not sure where you are, the time difference 🙂
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Ooh! Can’t wait! 🙂
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Actually I did 2, to try to catch up 🙂 (Both in one post, since they’re tiny!)
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Nice! I’m going to keep my eyes peeled!
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Good, meanwhile I’m serving up pound cake with cherry pie filling on top… am I torturing you yet? 🙂
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Aaa-aaa-aaa-aaa-hhh…
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🙂 🙂
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Brilliant
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Thanks, Pete! 😀
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Or “‘Let’s talk’ – he closed his eyes.” ?
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Love it, wordwool. 😉
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Aren’t we all?
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You might be right about that… 😉
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Which is what makes it such a good story.
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Aw, shucks! 😛
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LOVE this!
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I LOVE you for saying so. Thank you so much! 😀
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Outstanding !!! Wow
Beautiful story :p
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Thank you very much! 😀
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Ouch!…in the best possible way as far as the writing goes. Another winner.
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Aw, thank you, John! 😀
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Love this! A whole world of trouble is evoked by those six words.
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It certainly makes one wonder what’s causing their relationship to break apart, doesn’t it? 😉
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Yes. It’s so clear they have drifted apart to the point that they have labeled each other–a point it’s difficult to return from. And who knows what each is really like. Is she independent or unable to accept love? Is he loving or clingy? And “tuts” and “whispers” speak volumes, too.
It really is nearly perfect. Every word makes you ask questions.
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Ask questions. Yes. That’s exactly what I wanted people to do, so I’m relieved that it has worked in this regard. Thank you, Nadia! 🙂
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🙂
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