oh, hammock, how congenial you are
your embrace is clingy yet feathery
languid, you rock me from side to side
‘tween my past and future, to and fro
for now, suspended in harmony
for now, suspended in harmony
ain’t nothin’ will get done wrong
ain’t nothin’ will get done right
if this rope remains too long
if this knot strains too tight
oh, hammock, how unpalatable you are
your embrace entraps me, it is too easy
suffocated by your smothering tide
hung down deep, boundless sleep below
for now, crucified in harmony
for now, crucified in harmony
ain’t nothin’ will get done wrong
ain’t nothin’ will get done right
if this rope remains too long
if this knot strains too tight
by TETIANA ALEKSINA & TONY SINGLE
© All rights reserved 2018
Wonderful. Wonderful. What a lucid language for such deeper truth. Such easy natural flow, yet so true so true. Thanks. Both of you.
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And thank you for reading us. Truly!
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Hi there. The colour you have added to your photo icon is a fresh new addition. Thanks 😁
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Thank you!
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I think it’s funny. It’s supposed to be funny right?
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It can be. 😉
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Didn’t read it carefully enough.
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Hey, no harm done, my friend! We really appreciate you visiting! 😀
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Love you!
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How long have you been writing poems for? because you are really good
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Tati and I have been writing poems for years, and together for about four. 😀
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congratulation
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I loved this!
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Thank you so much! 😀
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Love the hammock and what you have been able to craft about it. Yes, this poem could be turned into a song for its frequent repetitions. I think I read another poem of yours and told you just the same.
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I believe you did too. I’m certainly influenced by the rhythm of popular songs when I write my poetry, that’s for sure. I think this also bleeds over into my collaborations with Tati sometimes. 😛
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