i looked on high at a dark sky
with some lonely clouds thin & wan
like strands of grey hair combed over
to hide a barber’s disappointment
the lunar crescent arched on itself
it bristled like a wild white ferret
as undecided as god’s weather
to snug with lume or pounce the hand
youth once held such gilded hope
but everything tends towards decay
the pleaides winked down on me
‘tween those wispy bars of thraldom
as i staggered o’er the aging earth
yearning there to feel more grounded
the head feels all that the heart cannot
guidance through the lack of direction
in high pastures and greener heavens
lies the mathematics of destiny
youth once held such gilded hope
but everything tends towards decay
by TETIANA ALEKSINA & TONY SINGLE
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hey
cool blog 🙂 will give it a follow and a like !
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Thanks so much, Jason! 😊
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Brilliantly conceived and penned.
Now tell me, why is this reminding me of an C18th/C19th poem by one of the big names that’s annoyingly escaping me?
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Ooh! Now that’s interesting! I hope you’ll be able to remember, Crispina!
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I keep sleeping in the hope it comes to me. If it ever does, I’ll let you know
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Quite dystopian, with the image to match.
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Thank you, Dolly! 😊
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That last line did it for me. You two are awesome poets!
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Aw, you’re always so kind, Maria. We’re blushing so red that we look like a pair of stop signs now! 😛
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😂 Snow White’s lips can’t even compare!
But it is true though. You two are quite the tandem 🙂
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😊🙏
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Death, taxes and decay?
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The trifecta!
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I needed that! I step out in to a radiant bright brand new day, truly positively uplifted Tony.
(Love that ‘to hide a barbers disappointment’ line.)
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Hee hee hee. 😛
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Tony,
Yes it does. Entropy is constant. Thanks,
Gary
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Thanks, Gary!
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