Book Club Release ~ The one 18+ collaboration

“Tous les genres sont bons, hors le genre ennuyeux.” (All styles are good except the tiresome kind.) Voltaire, L’Enfant Prodigue, Preface.

My dearest readers, I submit for your judgment my new collaboration.

Well… I should admit that erotica isn’t my forte. That’s why when I received a request about a collaboration from eroticmusings my first thought was something like, ‘Какого хрена…’ But later I scratched my nape and mumbled, “OK, let’s try.” (I’m bold unbolt after all!)

I can’t say that it was easy, but it was great fun nevertheless. Thank you, eroticmusings! (And I’m sorry if I was too dominant here.)


A dank day. Rain gives the leaf slaps in the face
exactly how you slapped me yesterday.
I obey you. Rain drops seep through foggy lace.
Reality sinks like a castaway.

A cuneiform flows along your spine.
Your Code of Hammurabi is fair and plain.
Guilty as charged! I’m naked and supine.
You enforce a judgement with serene disdain.

I recall menthol smoke and a ruby trace.
Silk fabrics. Ice cubes on the sweating tray.
Long viscous waves of desire softly erase
friable mounds of anguish along the way.

My heart rhythm gasps with a rapid splitting sine.
I squirm in a climax. Again… and again.
Last lines. I jerkily empty a glass of wine.
I’m ravished by my favorite novel and rain.

© All rights reserved 2015

34 thoughts on “Book Club Release ~ The one 18+ collaboration

  1. This was supple curves of white lace in the light of a window in a dark room. Art and erotica go well together when you do it the way you do it. Absolutely loved the ending. 😉

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    • Actually, I thought it was well done and not shady at all. I actually fear writing erotica and admire anyone with the courage and talent to present it in a way that celebrates love as an artform.

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    • Dragons are fun ;D I am always reluctant to write erotica because I don’t want to risk doing a poor job of it. Some people have a wonderful talent for it, but I’m not convinced I’m one of those people. 😉

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    • Ha Ha Ha Haaaaa! That would be a delightful project. You’ve talked me into it. First there needs to be a wedding since Papa Otter is very strict with his daughter about dating Oliver who was last seen past out in jail after an evening of watching the racey downriver pole dancing otter girls and drinking too much Minnow Tale otter beer. 😀

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    • Thank you, Meg ❤
      You're an endless source of love and acceptance… of great support. You share your fire with us and we catch fire near you again and again… and sometimes it's getting really hot 😛

      Thank you… With love, your Tia XOXO

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  2. My man, this was a great poem. Although I spent half of the time going to the dictionary to see what some words meant, you do have quite a great vocabulary or probably the other way that I´m un-vacabularian (see? I just invent words). Beautiful written, you completely unbolted the bolt. No fixing it now, you´ll have to stick with erotica now.

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    • Oi… it looks like another victim of ravishing 😯
      Oh, my poor Charly and his raped brain! Now (as an honest person) I should… no, not marry you. Maybe just one sexy unbolted collaborations? Lovemaking is much more funny when you’re not single-handed 😛
      (And now I’m going to be fucking serious. Thank you, Charly! You rock!)

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  3. Good Job! I love to write poetry – but this – you have done well! You gave me the giggles – but still, I thought it was superb. You almost made me think erotica could be enlightening. But, No!

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    • LOL! Thank you, Dee 😀
      I sighed with relief… the most scary thing for me was to write something serious about ‘jade rods’ and ‘lotus buds’…. yuck! Your giggling is a good sign. At least, we weren’t dull 😛

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