Erm… hullo there. (This is rather awkward…)
Dear Reader, the stuff that was originally posted here has been removed.
We have done this because said stuff has since been included in one of our published books. We hope you’ll believe us when we say we’re not trying to be stingy. No, this has been done to honour the people who have already spent their hard-earned money on our eBook creations.*
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Wow. When it hit me, I remained staring at the screen for a minute. Wonderful, very beautifully written. The metaphor in the last line strikes very well.
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The whole thing is just a beautifully formed little gem really, isn’t it? I quite agree! 🙂
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Nice imagery.
Love Tele x
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Tati thanks you, Tele. 😀
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Yes 😛
Thank you so much, Tele!
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In other words… guys… don’t come unglued.
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Not bad advice really. 😉
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I enjoyed this one, Tati. I liked the bluntness of glue.
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“The bluntness of glue.” Now that’s a way of thinking about it that never occurred to me before…
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LOL! Thank you so much, Babe 😀
You always know that particular word which knocks out!
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Wow. This squeezed me hard just like he did.
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It rather has that effect, doesn’t it, Yasmeen? 🙂
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It does! Like with other poems sometimes you just come across something and it squeezes you almost as if it were you it was talking about.
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I completely get you. And that’s good poetry when you think about it. If it can make you feel that way, then I call that success! 🙂
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Oh, yes. 💕
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Completely agree! 😉
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Parenthetical note –burn this after reading– shouldn’t “smashed-to-pieces” be hyphenated?
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Hm. I don’t know. Tati? 🙂
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Oops… really?
(shame on me!)
Thank you, Gregory!
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Passing on the love from my grammarist aunts who went through Irish Catholic schools.
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The fact that this feels like a ten page short story speaks volumes about how much you’ve learned from the practice of writing six word stories. Love it.
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Should be ten-page. Ugh. I should take my own advice…
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She has indeed learned much, Gregory. I’ve a feeling Tati can teach me a thing or two about writing now. 😛
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So tense.
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It is, isn’t it? 🙂
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Very sharp and vivid! Quite poignant! 🙂
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I was really taken with this one, Jonathan. I can see you are too! 🙂
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Yep! Absolutely! 🙂
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Oh… thank you so much, Jonathan ❤
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