I look at you.
I smell a rat.
Your familiar coo
And your skin is matt.
Hallelujah is in your voice
And this smell is my biggest hardship.
It looks like I have no choice.
I again stand on this airstrip.
I look at you.
I smell a rat.
My thoughts are a clew.
Bryan Adams sings… Drat!
It’s time to pay my invoice.
It’s time to break this grip.
Love loves to love love.
Do you love Joyce?
I see how you’re touching your lip…
I look at you.
You smell like a rat!
All this makes me spew.
I take up my gat.
by TETIANA ALEKSINA
© All rights reserved 2014
unbolt me 
This man is paranoid…..
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Interesting point, Charly!
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very well composed … and such a creative blog name 🙂
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Thank you so much. Tati devised the name. 🙂
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🙂 Hope to see more of you here Tony 🙂
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You definitely will! I’m here all the time! 😀
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good and sharp, but not odious (like the smell of a rat?)
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Yes indeed! Thanks so much for reading!
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Thank you for the poem. I have smelled many a rat in my time!
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And it’s not a smell one easily forgets, is it? Thanks for reading, my friend! 😀
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Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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Drat! is the perfect response to Bryan Adams. Cool site. Well done. Thanks for visiting AHintOfLight.com.
Pat
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Thanks so much for visiting with us too, PMcG! 🙂
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