I look at you.
I smell a rat.
Your familiar coo
And your skin is matt.
Hallelujah is in your voice
And this smell is my biggest hardship.
It looks like I have no choice.
I again stand on this airstrip.
I look at you.
I smell a rat.
My thoughts are a clew.
Bryan Adams sings… Drat!
It’s time to pay my invoice.
It’s time to break this grip.
Love loves to love love.
Do you love Joyce?
I see how you’re touching your lip…
I look at you.
You smell like a rat!
All this makes me spew.
I take up my gat.
by TETIANA ALEKSINA
© All rights reserved 2014
Simple and gripping. Congratulations!
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Oh… thank you, good sir 😛
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Aww. That sounds sweet. Although, thank you for sharing your creations. 🙂
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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I never get tired to say thank you! 😛
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I absolutely love this kind of poetry, it makes people think and laugh maybe cry 🙂
thanks for sharing your beautiful mind!
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Aww… thank you… it’s the best response! Please, feel free… thinking and laughing and even crying are allowed on my blog! I’m always here for you with a clean handkerchief 😉
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I wonder if these lyrics were written by a Siren!?… I think they are awesome indeed!
Best wishes, Aquileana 😀
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Oh… you disclosed me, Aquileana!
Truly, I overheard this song when I visited one my familiar Siren 😛
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I tried to read Joyce’s Ulysses years ago when I was in art college. I didn’t understand it, so I find your poem much more agreeable. Now, let me just grab my (imaginary) cat and settle in to read more of your wordsmithery! (I really do wish I had a cat. Ulysses had a loyal dog though. Its name was Argos, and it waited years for its master to return. When Ulysses finally got home, the dog saw and then died. That’s either a very sad story or very heartwarming. I still don’t know which!) 😛
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OK… You caught me, Tony!
I haven’t read Ulysses yet 😛
It’s just my strange imagination distorted the masterpiece 🙂
Oh! Do you wanna a cat? Wow… they’re so lovely… I know… I had.
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Ooh! I love Simon’s Cat. He’s awesome! Ha ha! 😀
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Yes, it’s absolutely awesome!
Especially I like its cooing!
Oh! How sweet!
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Nice!
It’s fun to read these comments. I studied Joyce under Dr. Bob Spoo (many years ago as an undergraduate) at the University of Tulsa (how Joyce’s personal items, papers, & Biblioteque National library card came to Oklahoma is a mystery to me…The James Joyce Quarterly too).
Is it possible to give a spoiler to Ulysses?
“and his heart was going like mad and yes I said yes I will Yes.”
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Oh, thank you!
Thank you for your praise for my modest poem and our unbridled comments 🙂
That is why I advised on my main page to pay attention on comments here… It’s something like a hellish mix of alter-world, looking glass, outlaws and a commune of hippie 🙂 You’re welcome! Join to our fun get-together! Feel free!
You can see that I’m pretty strict and grey in my writings, but the basement here lives with own vivid life… and I really like this!
P.S. It’s one of my favorites comments here…
https://unbolt.wordpress.com/2014/10/23/a-refuge/comment-page-1/#comment-507
P.P.S. Thank you again!
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Very nice👍
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Oh, thanks! 🙂
And thank you very much for following!
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I like it! I’ve never read Joyce’s Ulysses, so some of the ideas are lost on me, though I did pick up a copy of the book along with a ton of other books at a used book sale this summer! From the time when I was around 11 years old and up, I spent my childhood reading mostly Stephen King novels, though I’ve had Ulysses highly recommended to me by several people!
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Thank you, Ry!
Yes, I’ve never read Joyce’s Ulysses too 🙂 This book is #1 in my must-read-list now.
Oh… Sorry, I should leave you. Morpheus is waiting for me. See you, Ry!
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Sleep well Unbolt!
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Okay, absolutely loved this line, “Love loves to love love”, and of course “I smell a rat”. Wonderful! Have a great Sunday!
Always,
Alice
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Oh, thank you, my sweet canary…
To be honest, it was a quote 🙂
“Love loves to love love”
Do you love Joyce? 😉
Please, enjoy your weekend, Alice!
MH ❤
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Shall we celebrate Bloomsday 2015? Enjoy the remains of Sunday! Have a wonderful week!
Alice ♥
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Of course! We shall! 🙂
Did you choose your costume?
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Hum…I have a little time to whip something up! And you, have you selected something?
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Hmmm… Scylla and Charybdis!
I can be simultaneously one and another 🙂
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I’m reading Ulysses right now 😀
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Really?! OMG! 🙂
I hope, you don’t take this verse as a spoiler!
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Nah, I don’t mind spoilers. I usually get deep into the stories when I’m reading that I forget things.
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OK… But sometimes I treat pretty frivolously with classics 😉
Beware!
All characters and events depicted are fictional, and any resemblance to persons living, dead, or fictional or situations past, present, or fictional is purely and completely coincidental 😉
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